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Dragon Mage: Chapter 1Eric ran down the hall in a panic. In honesty, he probably should have taken up running. He had an exercise regimen that kept him in good shape, and also rewarded him with a toned muscular structure, which permitted him to achieve feats of strength not common to his classmates. However, his ability to arrive at the particular class to which he ran was, in the words of his professor, “not exactly spectacular.”
The arrangement, however, was not entirely fair. He ended one class on one side, in the upstairs observatory of the academy, and had not more than five minutes to arrive at the next class, located on the first floor, and opposite corner of the outer building. From there, the professor would sometimes hold class outside.
Wherever it was didn't matter, it was a bit far for Eric to even think of walking. Unfortunately, the first part of his journey was usually through students, professors, and assistants using the halls in between class

Let Me Be Your Escape (Part 40)

Part 40 - Never Change

Hours must have gone by before I awoke, finding myself lying next to Toby, who was happily still dozing in a deep sleep. Both of us were resting on top of the couch, which was in the living room of my parent's house. Quietly stretching, I turned my head so that I was looking at Toby's face.

The dark circles beneath his lower eye lids had lightened up since the first time that I'd ever seen him sleeping. His hair, which I was slowly coming to terms with, was as much of an unruly mess as it'd been on day one. But as disarrayed as it was, I didn't want it to be changed about him. The light from the moon lit the room a sm

Tobuscus: Demon Sorcerer CH 8

It’s dark…I can barely see anything. I hear people coughing and children crying.
“It’s going to be fine, sweetheart. I won’t let anything happen to you.” She says.
I believe her.
Someone starts to scream. I clutch at her as she pulls me away from the screams. She puts her hands on my shoulders and tells me to listen very closely.
“I love you. I love you so much. You be a good girl.”
The ground shakes and my ears ring with an explosion.

I bolt upright in my bed and scream. My scream dies away as I realize I’m awake.
What was that?
BOOOOOM!!
Oh, of course. Sean and Tobuscus must be

Let Me Be Your Escape (Part 1)

Part 1 - Intro of Epicosity

Taking my seat on the plane that would take me to the next part in my life, I began to think of all the things that I would be leaving behind.

My family. Friends. A familiar place. The overall sense of security.

But taking the place of what I left would be: A chance at success. A life of my own. And above all, a new beginning.

Sure I'd miss my home, and being able to know that my parents were just up the road if I needed them. However, no matter how comforting that information was, I had to give it all up.

So with my brave face on, I headed towards my destination.

Los Angeles, California.

My name is B

Drifter GirlThe stims bite hard, cold sharp needles sticking to the back of my neck. There’s this moment where the cold floods my veins, and it’s sheer fucking agony like liquid nitrogen eating at me from the inside, but then it’s gone, and all that’s left is the rush. Colors are sharper now, lights shine like burning flares, and that empty feeling in my gut is gone. Some fucker walks past the alley. He’s got gang-tats, glowing Red Dragon symbols cutting up his neck. The bastard has a girl on each arm, all short skirts and big tits, and all three stink of beer and money, and he spits on me, the piece of shit. Spits and laugh

untitledTo my father and my brother:

I hate you for not losing what I will lose
I hate you for not being capable of such loss.

And for not allowing me to speak of such, for stumbling
to the end of sorrow alone,

unspoken,

for bearing out injury
and pride,

unspeaking.

And the blame laid at my door for loving,

for shameful
animal grieving,

for the way I was carefully unfolding
my heart

in words.

Little Dove LullabyLittle dove, innocent child,
You'll never be alone.
So young and dear,
You needn't fear.
War is for when you've grown.
Little dove, innocent child,
For you a cuff of bone
From soldiers passed
And gone to rest.
Carve new wars of your own.
Little dove, innocent child.
I wish I could atone.
But after spring,
They clipped your wings;
Now you wear chains of stone.
Little dove, innocent child,
How could we have known?
The fields are dust;
The flowers rot,
And innocence is gone.

Signum Iniquitas (What's Your Sin? intro)They said, "She's an angel."
So they brought her to church
And taught her to pray.
He said, "You're my angel."
So he bought her a ring
And taught her to sin.
She said, "I am human."
So she sought out the truth
And thought for the first time.

MayBelle's Circus; The MangaI am really excited about this. I actually completely forgot, but my friend :iconzoriku: is making a manga for the story.

She's already got page one done. You can find it here --- http://zoriku.deviantart.com/art/Maybelle-s-Circus-Manga-Page-1-359829230 .
I'll also be making a separate folder for the pages in a moment, so they'll be found easily.

I'm just so happy that my story has some awesome fans. Thank you so much, everyone~

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The Fallen Star

by ~TheFS, Aug 11, 2012, 3:41:15 AM
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The Fallen Star

When I first started writing this story, I didn't realise where it was going to take me. I started off with just a few words scrawled on a piece of paper about 'the light of a fallen star', which I then lengthened into the beginning of a short project at school. But, when that was done, I really wanted to carry on and find out what was going to happen next.

I kept writing, and now over 250k words later, here I am! Of course, that's spread over four books I've written so far.

My goal throughout this series to create a whole new world, with new plants, animals, places. From the very start, I knew I didn't want to steal ideas from others, such as Elves, Dwarfs, Hobbits etc. For example, The Fallen Star takes place on Truaine, MAP UPDATED one of three planets that are referenced throughout the book.

The first book is now officially FINISHED

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Chapter 10: [link]
Chapter 11: [link]
Chapter 12: [link]
Chapter 13: [link]
Chapter 14: [link]
Chapter 15: [link]
Chapter 16: [link]
Chapter 17: [link]
Chapter 18: [link]
Chapter 19: [link]
Chapter 20: [link]
Chapter 21: [link]
Chapter 22: [link]
Chapter 23: [link]
Chapter 24: [link]
Chapter 25: [link]
FIN.

^^ The second book, The Fallen Star: Trapped Within, is underway...

TFS: Trapped Within is technically a two-parter, but will be uploaded as two 'books'. This means that the parts will be shorter than book one, but together, probably longer.

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 9: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 10: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 11: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 12: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 13: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 14: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 15: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 16: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 17: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 18: [Coming Soon]
Chapter 19: [Coming Soon]

Characters

The Watchers
Rantil - The main character.
Lakor - Rantil's friend, and colleague
Hamsol - Rantil and Lakor's teacher. He is teaching them the skills of the Watcher.

Nichal
Saru - The leader of the village, Nichal
Ganarth - Second in command of the village
Bora - The Hunter
Qzen - The Doctor
Neetha - Rantil's neighbour
Neico - The Schoolteacher

Wrestek
Putoko - Rantil's best friend, when they were children
Yaneria - Putoko's sister

Siale
She - Leader of the Sett: the governing body of Truaine
Filoto - She's slave and cruel minion
Torku - Takes lead of the Council in the Watchers' absence

Ciameth
Kantou - Chalder from Ciameth, who comes to Truaine to correct a mistake she made
Ulmak - a powerful Ciamethian
Dawren - Kantou's father
Evron - Atarpa's brother

The Degarn (Book 3)
Atarpa - head of the Degarn, carries a great wisdom
Hungaru
Verrat
Taivas
Sile
Jinova

Demons
The Demon - a demon from Dremnor, who seeks revenge for the inprisonment of his race
The General - Head of the Demon Army, which invades Truaine

Others
Shieef - An old woman, living in the wilderness
Worral - A lost, alone man, who has kept and hidden the key to the Temple for many years
Bal'si - the Shaman of the Uraal-si'tu

There are plenty of other characters, but these are the important ones.

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~Shyanne-Kai Apr 14, 2013

Wow, this sounds really interesting, and it looks like you've put a lot of effort into it.

~TheFS 3 days ago Hobbyist Writer

For an 8-year project, it's certain taken a lot more effort than I ever thought it would

~DarkHunterGirl1 Oct 22, 2012 Student Writer

YAY!! I am SO proud!!

~TheFS Oct 23, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thanks!
I'm not sure I like the next cover yet; there's something about it I don't like.

But on the bright side, I've written around 10,000 words of the next book! It won't be long until I start uploading some new chapters

~DarkHunterGirl1 Oct 23, 2012 Student Writer

SO EXCITED!! I am super proud of you hun!!

=DelvyBoops Oct 14, 2012 Professional Writer

I too will read when I get the chance too. =3

*XRosewaterX Oct 6, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Awesome on finishing the chapters for your book! ^^ I'm almost done with posting the chapters for mine before I go through and edit it again XD

~TheFS Oct 6, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Editing it again?! I thought that's what you were doing this time?

*XRosewaterX Oct 6, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

When I say editing again, I mean mostly the first few chapters

(namely 2, 3, and 4).

~DarkHunterGirl1 Oct 5, 2012 Student Writer

Congrats to my awesome beta for finishing your book! Way to go hun! I'm proud to have someone so awesome as my beta!!!

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